Free Feedback on "Why I Write”
Hi Tahsin,
Thank you for submitting your essay for feedback. I'm excited to offer this to friends of David and Write of Passage. You can expect:
- Written feedback on structure and flow
- Notes on clarity and concision (at the sentence/paragraph level)
- "The One Thing" to focus on if you were to revise this piece
- And a video overview of my feedback.
My goal is not just to give you feedback that would improve this single essay but to give you feedback that, if you apply it to future projects, would make you a better writer (by helping you become a better self-editor).
I'm going to work through the drafts in the order they were submitted (you're eighth), and I'll get back to everyone within the next two weeks.
All the best,
Garrett Kincaid