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I think this was "over-edited' (including by Scott and his team), so I think the style/tone is inconsistent (eg war analogy at end was thrown in). My goal was an accessible and inspiring lesson on how almost everyone can use AI. I want this to be the first in a series - AI as Teacher, AI as Doctor, AI as Co-Founder etc

It's on curiosity in kids.

I’m super grateful for this offer. This is an essay I’ve written to try and explain the concept of flow states from both western and eastern perspectives. My target audience is founders and my aim is for this essay to eventually be something that could serve to help explain my coaching practice/style. It’s a work in process and I think I can do a better job more clearly explaining how the various concepts connect. I’m grateful for any feedback.

This essay is a manifesto statement cum whitepaper summary—designed to kickstart a public conversation, shape a strategy framework and develop into a playbook that could define my professional practice. I’m not sure whether it would be stronger with some personal anecdotes, case stories (Malcolm Gladwell-style) or maybe a few more academic references. I’d love your take on which direction might work best.

This essay is going to be published as a chapter in a friend's book on copywriting, which is a series of essays from top copywriters. I'll use it elsewhere as well, in whole or part. How could be better? Ah, in so many ways: More focused. Better structure. Perhaps it's really a book — My Life in Advertising — that I tried to do as a relatively short essay. ; )

This essay explores the media/news landscape in the digital age, outlining how it makes us more angry yet less informed. I think the essay could do a better job at weaving different ideas and concepts together in an orderly manner

The purpose is to explain why I chose to start writing after years and years of contemplation. It's a deep exploration of different facets of it, but the problem is I think it's way too long, and I think most people will not read it because of the length. I want to make it resonate a little bit more. I want to cut out any fluff and make it flow better so that it doesn't take up so much space and is more approachable for people to read. I'm quite frankly not sure how this could be better...

Founder Fit is the real founder mode. I'm working on a framework about Founder Fit. You need 3 things: business fit, role fit, and product fit in order to unlock founder mode. Founder Mode isn't about micro-manging, it's about making the business fit you and not the other way around. I think the structure and flow could be better. How do i weave in my story and thoughts while also educating or presenting my framework? I'd like to emphasize and bring out my style and unique voice. It's been a while since I've written online. Used to have a travel blog with 30k readers back in the day, but stopped writing. Lost myself a little bit and here to find my voice again.